The Passion of a Swimmer

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Hi all you fellow swimming enthusiasts. I've written a little story of my Passion of a Swimmer. Please enjoy. www.geocities.com/.../passion_of_a_swimmer.htm Have a super day, Dawn
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    Hi Innerfish & scyfreestyler, thank you for your input. I re read the article, could see the hypocrisy noted and immediately changed it. What do you think? www.geocities.com/.../passion_of_a_swimmer.htm Happy Laps
  • Nice description of the workout and your response! Could feel your response to the water and the effort. Only one point I found myself wondering about: You notice a fellow swimmer not hydrating and say: " Look at that silly ass over there, training and never taking in fluids! Oh well, that's her choice, FOOL!!" But later you say "There are many negative people out there in this sport as well. The backstabbers, the troublemakers and those who delight in putting others down. BUT, do I take any notice of people like THAT? NO!" Might these two statements contradict each other? Sure it's tempting to dismiss someone who doesn't seem to be "following the rules," even feel hostile toward the apparent disrespect for the sport and its demands. But if you're not into negativity or putting people down, it's something to think about. We don't hear her point of view, only see her from yours. Aside from that, again, some very on-target reflections.
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    Former Member
    Aside from the dosage of hypocrisy noted by innerfish it's a good read. I have to admit that when I first saw the title I thought this was going to be a swimming related satire of The Passion of the Christ.
  • Originally posted by sadet Hi Innerfish & scyfreestyler, thank you for your input. I re read the article, could see the hypocrisy noted and immediately changed it. What do you think? www.geocities.com/.../passion_of_a_swimmer.htm Happy Laps Yah, that works!