Freestyle- Constructive criticism requested, please!

Your stroke looks pretty good. A couple things I noticed: you could be tighter in your streamline. Make sure your arms are pressed right up against your ears. Second, you aren't keeping a high enough elbow. Your arm is very straight during your pull. You'll get more from your stroke if you employ an EVF style stroke. For comparison watch your stroke vs. Michael Phelps' here ax77_hHq9Dc Keep up the good work!

Your stroke looks pretty good. A couple things I noticed: you could be tighter in your streamline. Make sure your arms are pressed right up against your ears. Second, you aren't keeping a high enough elbow. Your arm is very straight during your pull. You'll get more from your stroke if you employ an EVF style stroke. For comparison watch your stroke vs. Michael Phelps' here ax77_hHq9Dc Keep up the good work! Thanks, Kirk! :D Yep; a tighter streamline is my biggest challenge in all of the strokes, because of my past shoulder surgery. So, it is a stroke flaw caused by my physical limitation that prevents me from having ideal form. In breaststroke, since I can't get my shoulders any narrower, I'm working on at least trying to keep my elbows straight. As for EVF, I'll get right on it- thanks! And, thanks for the awesome video link; I especially like the end of it where the camera captures Phelps above and below the surface, simultaneously. :applaud:

I don't have the opportunity to watch elite swimmers train,but I thought the mantra was "train like you race". I do know from other threads that Elaine can breath to both sides.

I notice that you only breath on your left side during freestyle. Have you tried bilateral breathing? I made the switch last Feb after hurting my elbow and all I could do was easy freestyle. After 37 years out of the water I made myself learn 3,5,7 stroke breathing.

Bilateral breathing is OK for some people and a good skill to have,but there are almost no elite swimmers using it.I don't think there is any utility in 5 or 7 breathing except for variety in a workout.If one wants to work on breath control doing more SDK off the turn would be more useful. 5-7 bilateral breathing in a race is rarely done but there are plenty of cases where I have seen bilateral breathing. Usually it is in the form of 2 on one side 2 on the other. 1 on one side 1 or 2 on another side. Or a quick breath to the opposite side before the turn. Bilateral breathing does not have to be just every three strokes.

Here are three freestyle videos of my current stroke. I have been working to eliminate flaws that were previously pointed out: Head bounce on the non-breathing stroke, a lazy right hand exit at the end of the stroke, and splashy hands on entry. Whether I succeeded or not is open for discussion. And, in the process, I hope I didn't pick up any other bad habits! :afraid: Hey Elaine, don't have time to do a detailed critique, but I've noticed something that knelson didn't mention--you pull your hands pretty wide out to the sides when you pull back. If you pull closer to your body, you should be able to engage your core muscles more and get a more powerful pull. With your hands pulling that far out to your sides, you're not engaging all the muscles you can, or engaging them in the optimal fashion. As far as I'm concerned, you generally want your hands in the general vicinity of an imaginary line that goes through your shoulders and goes down towards your feet at the catch and start of the pull, then sweep in towards your center line. That will engage a lot of the muscles from your abs up to the little muscles in your arms and shoulders and also help you develop a healthy roll. Take a look at where Phelps initiates his pull in that video--pretty much in line with his shoulders, then he sweeps in under his chest and stomach. You're starting your pull much further out to the sides than he is.

I don't have the opportunity to watch elite swimmers train,but I thought the mantra was "train like you race". I do have the opportunity to watch elite swimmers train - my Swimming Australia club includes a 2012 Olympian and 3 people who competed at World Short Course Champs in Instanbul (silver medal relay, 2 individual finalists + 9th). If people would like, I can closely watch our the High Performance Squad in training and see how much bilateral breathing goes on.

I notice that you only breath on your left side during freestyle. Have you tried bilateral breathing? I made the switch last Feb after hurting my elbow and all I could do was easy freestyle. After 37 years out of the water I made myself learn 3,5,7 stroke breathing. Actually, what I typically do is breathe to the left going down the pool and breathe to the right coming back. I don't get enough air bilateral breathing, so this is how I stay balanced. But, even though I am a natural left breather, one of my stroke flaws I have been trying to correct (my head bouncing on the non-breathing stroke) happens mainly when I breathe to the left. So, I had video shot of only breathing to the left.

Hey Elaine, don't have time to do a detailed critique, but I've noticed something that knelson didn't mention--you pull your hands pretty wide out to the sides when you pull back. If you pull closer to your body, you should be able to engage your core muscles more and get a more powerful pull. With your hands pulling that far out to your sides, you're not engaging all the muscles you can, or engaging them in the optimal fashion. As far as I'm concerned, you generally want your hands in the general vicinity of an imaginary line that goes through your shoulders and goes down towards your feet at the catch and start of the pull, then sweep in towards your center line. That will engage a lot of the muscles from your abs up to the little muscles in your arms and shoulders and also help you develop a healthy roll. Take a look at where Phelps initiates his pull in that video--pretty much in line with his shoulders, then he sweeps in under his chest and stomach. You're starting your pull much further out to the sides than he is.Thanks for the suggestion, habu! I had my husband shoot some underwater video of my freestyle today, so I'll check it out (and post it on this thread), to see how bad it is... :afraid:

5-7 bilateral breathing in a race is rarely done but there are plenty of cases where I have seen bilateral breathing. Usually it is in the form of 2 on one side 2 on the other. 1 on one side 1 or 2 on another side. Or a quick breath to the opposite side before the turn. Bilateral breathing does not have to be just every three strokes. Sorry,I may have been a bit abrupt.I have heard too many "old school" coaches who wanted to "toughen" their swimmers with the 3,5,7 drill and I got a button pushed.Knowing how to breath bilaterally is certainly a valuable tool.