Looks like you're lifting your head a bit forward when you breathe, too. (Maybe that was your sighting?) When you turn to breath, imagine your belly button rotating to the water level.
Some Swim Smooth drills might help, like 6/1/6 and 6/3/6.
And take Jen up on her offer on the other forum. She's incredible. (But video in a pool.)
Looks like you're lifting your head a bit forward when you breathe, too. (Maybe that was your sighting?) When you turn to breath, imagine your belly button rotating to the water level.
Some Swim Smooth drills might help, like 6/1/6 and 6/3/6.
And take Jen up on her offer on the other forum. She's incredible. (But video in a pool.)