Swim Speed article - You&#39;re editing and criticism is welcomehttps://community.usms.org/swimming/f/general/5835/swim-speed-article---you-re-editing-and-criticism-is-welcomeI&#39;d like to publish this someday but it needs tweaking and maybe more than that. Your help is greatly appreciated Swimming Speed and Critical EVF Habit Formation How to get swimmers to form the most efficient technical swimming habits isen-USTelligent Community 12RE: Swim Speed article - You're editing and criticism is welcomehttps://community.usms.org/thread/78537?ContentTypeID=1Sat, 24 Nov 2007 05:39:11 GMT3187ac58-ba85-4314-b79a-c45cd885e09a:faca4b40-5637-4085-8238-d91f66763d71Allen StarkI like the paper.I&#39;m not an English Major so I won&#39;t comment on style.I think you should add some pictures of swimmers showing good EVF. I&#39;d also like to see pictures of the isometric exercises.One drill I do for EVF is dogpaddle with a snorkle.I can watch my arms and it is one EVF after another. Please keep up the good work and I&#39;m glad we have such an erudite contributer to our forums.<div style="clear:both;"></div>