So I figured since that last time I had a school project everybody had awesome ideas, I would hold my breath and hope that would happen again. :) I have to give an informative speech in my Comm 101 class. We can talk on anything we want so, naturally, I had no idea what to talk about. I finally decided on swimming after ruling out the history of sliced bread and soccer. But anyways, my question was what would you consider the most important aspects of swimming? I need three main points and I have two. 1)Strokes 2)Types aka. SCM, SCY, etc. Any ideas on what I already have or an idea for a third main point would be very helpful! Thanx a bundle!!
~Kyra
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I think this is quite good. You included lots of information that's really cool. (Knights swimmning in armor — who knew?)
My only suggestion, and this is optional, is when you discuss the strokes, start with breaststroke first. That's the one you mention prominently in your introduction. Since it was the first Olympic swimming event, you can start with that and move forward. It makes for a smoother transition, IMHO.
On the other hand, I think it's clever to discuss the strokes in I.M. order. Any plans to mention the medley event?
Nice job. I think you'll do well.
Adam
I think this is quite good. You included lots of information that's really cool. (Knights swimmning in armor — who knew?)
My only suggestion, and this is optional, is when you discuss the strokes, start with breaststroke first. That's the one you mention prominently in your introduction. Since it was the first Olympic swimming event, you can start with that and move forward. It makes for a smoother transition, IMHO.
On the other hand, I think it's clever to discuss the strokes in I.M. order. Any plans to mention the medley event?
Nice job. I think you'll do well.
Adam
